various incidents always happened in our life whether it be bad or good one. There are different opinions about situations that are not appropriate enough like a career that is not enjoyable or financial problems. Some people believe that these unsatisfactory conditions should be improved by our efforts while others think this type of life should be accepted anyway. In my opinion, it depends on situation that we are in then we can make a decision about solutions.
To begin with, majority of people are struggling with variety of problems from minor to major one. It appears that, some troubles are impossible to be solved. For instant, chronic disease like cancers are not curable and people who suffer from cancers are exceedingly hopeless. They are in terrible occasion and it is better for them to accept their disease and consequences.
On the other hand, in society we can see that people are not gratifying about their life. Some of these worrying matters are common among people that can be solved easily. For illustration, work place or types of career are not pleasure for enormous employees because it is not related to their skills or they have low income. Another example that I can mention, is about education of pupils who are not smart enough to analyze some sophisticated issues. In fact, these are not tough situations because events like these can be managed easily by finding basic weaknesses and trying to solve them. Therefore, if people tend to accept situations like them, it would be their fault.
In conclusion, I think our reactions are dependent on different circumstances that happened in life but for majority of problems there are solutions to perform. Hence, how it would be better to carry out the best act for developing our situations.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatifactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Today most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger Is this a positive or negative development 61
- Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Many countries spend a lot of money in art Some people think investment in art is necessary but others say money is better spent on public services and facilities Discuss both views and give your own opinion 62
- Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time This can beneficial for teenagers and the community as well Do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Various
various incidents always happened in our life w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97986577181 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66542675707 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546979865772 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8393012242 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16226317278 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548865219248 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037782040938 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944238652967 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494054724083 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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