It is a commonplace issue that in each region some illegal terms are performed. Some people believe that jail sentence is not a useful punishment, instead education and improving skills could be replaced. I think, all genres offenders should be punished in different ranges, meanwhile opportunities for learning new matters can be provided.
To begin with, there are various crimes which are classified in different levels. Majority of delinquents are arrested by police because of murder, burglary or kidnap. In fact, number of these crimes required to be considered in diverse dimensions precisely. Because, some sorts of faults like murder is an intentional performance while manslaughter is unintentional ones such as accident. Actually, every person who commit a crime should pay to figure out about the mistakes. Furthermore, all details of sinners should be announced in society to aware people about crimes.
On the other hand, there are some suggestions that improving the literacy and skills are more profitable than prison sentence. I partly agree with this statement because of some reasons. Firstly, numerous children and youths are in jail without enough experience of having life. Therefore, education is an ideal chance to change their thought and mind for subsequent days when they can back to their normal life. Secondly, offenders cannot go around freely because they are a huge menace for community and some limitations should be applied. Hence, education in jail during people's trial would be possible to do.
In conclusion, all crimes whether deliberate or not, have specific punishments that culprits have to pay. But in that same time when they are in prison or banishment, they can promote their talents and skills.
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- The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today s world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32608695652 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77125362803 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648550724638 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3377487996 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.4705882353 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94117647059 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101160985524 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03270047159 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335403694934 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574359734508 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288144568941 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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