However, there are various types of data about cultures and customs in media and book, I believe that travelling is a basic work to carry out for collecting information about areas and cultures.
To begin with, going to long journey is a helpful issue to explore anything about all territories that we aim to go specially about cultures. Because, it has specific feeling when we can have close connection with different tribes and ethics. In this case, we can be familiar with behaviour, lifestyle, local foods and even how people in other areas are breeding their children. Besides, there are numerous languages and cultures which are concealed and none of the websites and books are mention them. For instant, recently, a new region in centre of china was explored that it belonged to our ancestor centuries ago. There are many people still living while they have no accessible methods to any internet or media due to this kind of culture and area was hidden.
On the other hand, as I mentioned that, all media applications and books are optimal approaches to obtain data about cultures and people around the world but there are some drawbacks with this matter. When we are studying about customs and people in other territories, there is no exciting and enjoyable time in comparison with when are travelling. It is true that maps and websites are exceedingly useful to find anywhere and data but this way would never be replaced with travelling.
In conclusion, in spite of high level of information about cultures and people in different areas in internet and books, I believe that going to journey to explore anything about people and areas could be more profitable and extra data would be found.
- It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings That money should be spent on building modern buildings instead 73
- It is better to learn the way people lived in the past through films and video records than written documents To what extent do you agree or disagree 90
- Some people believe that managers are responsible for the organization s success While other think various features of the organization play a vital role in it Discusboth views and give your opinion 61
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatifactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Some people are happy to spend the whole life living in same place However others prefer to live in many areas over their life time Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, still, while, in conclusion, kind of, in spite of, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91349480969 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54697136494 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539792387543 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.0894364557 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.090909091 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161240364347 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653622542804 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425006391549 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989825913773 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300838484301 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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