Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Internet has become very important for us. Whatever we do today is only by the use of internet like, all the banking services, contacts with people, keeping files, and so on. Some people believe that it is better to use printed materials such as books and articles to do research. Others disagree. In my view, using internet to do research is better for two reasons.
First, Using internet allows us to learn and know more about how to use internet? As is is said that the more we use any material, the more we know about it. For example, when I was studying my udergraduate, I was assigned to prepare a report on computer management and computer software like microsoft word and microsoft access. I was having difficulty in finding the resources in library. I went to ask for help to my instructor and he suggested me to use internet for resources. Working with internet was not so easy for me at the time as I knew only basics of internet. But, still i tried. it took so much of hard work and time but finally, i did it. later on, I realized that I was able to work with internet things quite easily than before. When I was in university for my graduate program i was assigned a lot of presentations to complete. But, compared to some of my friends, I was easy with internet and got all the help regarding my presentations through internet whereas my friends was having a difficult time. This taught me that, Working with new stuff might be difficult for the first time but later on it becomes more easier than it was before.
Second, It easy to find all sorts of materials sitting at one place. Internet is a place where we can get different books and research articles, all we have to do is place the right keyword while searching. For example, while my working with my final year thesis of electrical engineering, o wan not getting the exact materials in library. Also, it became for difficult for the professor to get the materials on library as well as stores too. we decide to go on internet and spending two days we got the books and articles, we were searching but we had to pay for it. But still it was a great help, we got from internet. Also, I remember i was searching one novel named "The silent Cry" since many days on the stores which i found on internet so easily by paying the amount. As you can see, internet helps a lot finding the resources and saving the time.
In sum, whether internet has not been reached to every part of the world but, still working with internet for the books and other materials helps a lot in completing the task.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
...know more about how to use internet? As is is said that the more we use any material,...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...new only basics of internet. But, still i tried. it took so much of hard work and...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...basics of internet. But, still i tried. it took so much of hard work and time but ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...much of hard work and time but finally, i did it. later on, I realized that I was...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s in university for my graduate program i was assigned a lot of presentations to ...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to regard' or 'regard'.
Suggestion: to regard; regard
...easy with internet and got all the help regarding my presentations through internet where...
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Line 2, column 1128, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... the first time but later on it becomes more easier than it was before. Second, It easy to...
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...rials on library as well as stores too. we decide to go on internet and spending t...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, regarding, second, so, still, well, whereas, while, for example, such as, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45762711864 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51871763471 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46186440678 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5199244006 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.16 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.88 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226399504077 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773016100611 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101503820946 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181619834929 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132012963869 0.0645574589148 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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