In some parts of the world, it is becoming increasingly popular to try to find out the history of their someone's family. Do you think it's a positive or negative development?
In the world of today, it has been becoming a trend to finding the history of people's life, especially their family background. This trend can be lead to several benefits. This essay, as my point of view, leads to, will elaborate more about the reason people doing this as I believe that this trend is a good improvement.
In the first place, it is irrefutable that the modern generation has no interest in knowing the background of the family. Nowadays children must focus on their studies and I think this is the best way to growing with self-reliant. Thus, no one can know about their family history so people try hard to find it. In addition, the first school for children is the house they live in, and do all activities can be related to the way his parents educating him. So that corporations do not want any family background for appropriate positions.
Secondly, historians recognize this as an academic interest. They collect information about the economy and culture of the society. They use this database to preserve the young generation to forget about their own family background as well as make several suggestions about a group of families for the government. As a result, there will be a massive outcome for both individuals and the government to deal with several problems in society because the database includes beliefs, values and religious and other related things to society.
To sum up, having considered all views above, I believe there will always be grate to find out the historic background of families in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, i think, in addition, as a result, as well as, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90874524715 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69946446295 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562737642586 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.12091108 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158865467422 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595277807186 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720738649283 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966461111289 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368612273141 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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