People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers

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People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

Decisions are the very primary scheme to become successful in any objective and those decisions need to be very refined as well as emotionless because emotion can move you insanely poor condition.

I completely agree with the issue that has been given and that is for the mentioned two reasons which I will describe in the following.

Decisions are the first and foremost scheme to dive into a sector as majority of success lies behind perfectly accomplishing a viable decision. One must be very conscious at making decisions in every phase of his life, because, if your decision is not with your side it must backfire on you. To make a decision, it is never be wise to develop one's decision by placing a strong percentage to the emotional way. A decision must be always unbiased. For instance, One has a strong liking towards Engineering but he is very weak at doing math and if that person choose his graduation career at an engineering scheme, you will not do good ever in his career. It is always preferable to do some research according to the existing data by which one can acquire the previous knowledge of that sector and consequently, it will help him to find out the flaws and obstacles that he may face during his engineering career. He should be cautious about the flaws that may encounter to him and also needs to be always insightful to solve those problems. But, if one has chosen engineering career just because he liked it once but not gained any of the mentioned knowledge, his sorrows know no bounds. Yes, Emotion may take place to make a decision after completely researching to that area. But, if anyone make the decisions according to his emotions, that must undermine him in the long run.

Similarly, Anybody who wants to go to Germany needs to mentally prepare himself to learn the native German language as he is a non-native German who wishes to go there for higher studies. But, one must be analysis the current situation of there to make the decision, he must be responsible to learn the language first as it is a barrier for most of the non-native people. There's no primary place for emotion to make a decision. One must be aware to examine all the possible outcome that may encounter and needs to find the way of solution before diving into a decision.

In conclusion, people who has developed the career and life always take their decisions according to the viable logic first and that should be the important aspect to get a fruitful result whereas emotion should be given a very little priority of taking any important decision.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f your decision is not with your side it must backfire on you. To make a decision...
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Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...on you. To make a decision, it is never be wise to develop ones decision by placin...
^^
Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ecision, it is never be wise to develop ones decision by placing a strong percentage...
^^^^
Line 5, column 819, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help him find' instead.
Suggestion: help him find
...f that sector and consequently, it will help him to find out the flaws and obstacles that he may...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1063, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to engineer'.
Suggestion: to engineer
... those problems. But, if one has chosen engineering career just because he liked it once bu...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1292, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...esearching to that area. But, if anyone make the decisions according to his emotions...
^^^^
Line 7, column 373, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
...rier for most of the non-native people. Theres no primary place for emotion to make a ...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, similarly, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2124.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 450.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6200895282 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473333333333 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0418432303 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.941176471 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4705882353 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 5.21951772744 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241105113901 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955041144433 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843497092147 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133959116006 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806411603352 0.0667264976115 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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