In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people
why might this be ?
do you think it's a positive or negative situation?
Rarely do residents of some countries like to rent houses to reside in anymore; they prefer to purchase and own them, instead. Could it be the case that appreciation and alteration are the reasons for their interest ? Whether this is true or false, one detriment is most apparent: the burden of mortgage loans on homeowners.
It is undeniable that as the population of residents in some countries increases - whether through immigration or birth - the demand for houses also increases, which often determines the price rate of the houses over the years. If residential real estate projects are unable to meet up with these ever-increasing requests, then houses will become scarce commodities, and because of that, their values will appreciate, which will benefit landlords, monetarily.
Let us not forget either that different people alter houses to suit different purposes. Children and adults, educationalists and entertainers, abled and disabled, for example, certainly have unique housing designs and features that are believed to help them ease their activities. Purchasing and owning their houses seems to be the only way by which these individuals can be allowed to extend or shrink, decorate or deface houses to achieve their desired housing structures, as their landlords are unlikely to grant such permission.
Of course, to purchase a house unlike to rent it is usually costly in some countries, and it is not uncommon among many homeowners to take out mortgage loans so as to afford it.
Unfortunately, such debts are sometimes paid back in huge amounts: interest, valuation, remortgaging and conveyancing fees among others. Worse, the house is likely to be repossessed by the lenders, regardless of the previous deposits, if the house owners default with these payments, which will be a huge loss of money to homeowners.
It then appears to me that owning a home is not only likely to drain the pocket of people, it may also lead to loss of potential properties. People should be considering these possible disadvantages rather than eyeing the perceived benefits of house appreciation and alteration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, as to, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30177514793 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96477892724 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594674556213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9972646386 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.846153846 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150129280827 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572033893749 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040770708598 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834647100528 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555919571371 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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