Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
it is a crucial policy to act honestly while you interact with others, and many people propose that telling the truth is an accurate way to gain the situation. I believe that telling the truth is required under any circumstances because always comes with beneficial consequences also lies prevent our intentions to be available
Being honest is the proper solution for any individual falls in troubles, as an employee in an oil company I managed to speak the truth no matter what happened and because of that, I advanced in a short period for example when my team made a settlement to minimize the use of the uniform during the workdays I immediately reviled the secret to the administration before a terrible incident occurred I received an email announcing that I am the new head of the team. Though I am the only one who advanced but at least I protect the group from big damage.
lies prevent us to acquire the purpose, due to the current technology Telling lies in job interviews may actually work against you because they usually charted, then guess what happened after the interviewer discover that. on the other hand, telling the truth at least keep your chance equally in or after the consultation. for instance, once you get a question about what motivates you to choose the industrial field the answer simply is money because if you tried to show a passion or inspiration to this domain they will notice that you are a liar and with lies, you can not make the last laugh.
To conclude, honesty is the best drive to achieve our goals. most importantly it accommodates advantages. however, lies eliminate our chance to success
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is a crucial policy to act honestly whi...
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Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s prevent our intentions to be available Being honest is the proper solution for ...
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Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lies
...I protect the group from big damage. lies prevent us to acquire the purpose, due ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ed after the interviewer discover that. on the other hand, telling the truth at le...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...e equally in or after the consultation. for instance, once you get a question about...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
...is the best drive to achieve our goals. most importantly it accommodates advantages....
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Suggestion: However
...importantly it accommodates advantages. however, lies eliminate our chance to success ...
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Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er, lies eliminate our chance to success
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, honestly, however, if, may, so, then, while, at least, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77816901408 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69405317973 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62676056338 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.132959792 48.9658058833 366% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.777777778 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.6045352989 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 5.45110844103 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19549717858 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717238061217 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603419233497 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111044537068 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759077386165 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is a crucial policy to act honestly whi...
^^
Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s prevent our intentions to be available Being honest is the proper solution for ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lies
...I protect the group from big damage. lies prevent us to acquire the purpose, due ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ed after the interviewer discover that. on the other hand, telling the truth at le...
^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...e equally in or after the consultation. for instance, once you get a question about...
^^^
Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
...is the best drive to achieve our goals. most importantly it accommodates advantages....
^^^^
Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...importantly it accommodates advantages. however, lies eliminate our chance to success ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er, lies eliminate our chance to success
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, honestly, however, if, may, so, then, while, at least, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77816901408 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69405317973 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62676056338 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.132959792 48.9658058833 366% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.777777778 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.6045352989 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 5.45110844103 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19549717858 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717238061217 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603419233497 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111044537068 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759077386165 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.