Prison is the best punishment for criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, there are many articles talking about incredible rising in crime and how to punish. Personally, I think prison is the best penalty for criminals.
First of all, for the majority of crimes, they are delicated to being in jail. Mainly so that the victim would be safe from futher harm. Take a murder as an example. He should not have chance to kill or harm someone else because he has been given capital punishment.
Another reason why I completely agree with this statement is that a number of inmates are actually a danger to society. A typical example of this is violating in a particular family. The sufferers are able children and women who are lack of protection and support from communities while the offender is their father or husband. In this case, if the offender has his freedom, he easily tend to commit violation again. So that prison sends out a strong message to people who are thinking about commiting a crime in the future.
On the other hand, some people argue that taking away one's freedom is just about the worst thing can do to a human. I might definitly not make he a better person but also worse. Prisons are likely to become "the schools of crime" where offenders can easily conclude with others to re-offend. Eating, sleeping and doing activities together might create criminal friendship in jail. This probably leads to a bad consequence that they will leae police behind and secretly implement a plot to break the law. That is why, the place is an ideal one for criminals to became accomplice.
To sum up, letting lawbreakers receiving prison is strict dicipline, but it is neccessary to keep society being safer fromm an illegal act.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tends'.
Suggestion: tends
...the offender has his freedom, he easily tend to commit violation again. So that pri...
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... easily tend to commit violation again. So that prison sends out a strong message to pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, while, i think, talking about, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79037800687 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54082756715 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659793814433 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7467252095 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4444444444 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205660874096 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528387279018 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533586578051 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933930905241 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543401797448 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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