You work in a gym but you are not a qualified gym instructor. A friend has written to you for advice on how to get fit and healthier..
Write a letter to your friend offering some suggestions. In your letter
. remind your friend that you are not an instructor
. offer some suggestions
. ask your friend if she would like to talk to a trained instructor
Dear Mary,
I was glad to hear you are visiting my place of work. I'm writing in regards to your enquiry on tips on how to stay healthy and fit.
I'm sure you're aware that I work as an assistant trainer at the gym centre and not yet a professional teacher.
However,I can give you few advice on how you can be healthier and fit.firstly, you should cut down on the quantity of food and reduce your junks consumption as this is not healthy for the body. Secondly, you can go for jogging and road-work on weekends which is often you free period. Furthermore, swimming can be helpful especially since am aware you love it.
May I suggest that you speak to one of our best skilled instructor who has been tutoring for the past 20 years. I'm sure you'll be offered all the necessary information but with extra charge for one on one tutorial and practical class sections.
Awaiting your response as soon as possible.
Best wishes,
Toyin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...hear you are visiting my place of work. Im writing in regards to your enquiry on t...
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Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...e visiting my place of work. Im writing in regards to your enquiry on tips on how to stay hea...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...tips on how to stay healthy and fit. Im sure youre aware that I work as an assi...
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Line 4, column 9, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...how to stay healthy and fit. Im sure youre aware that I work as an assistant train...
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Line 6, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...t yet a professional teacher. However,I can give you few advice on how you can ...
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Line 6, column 24, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advice seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little advice'.
Suggestion: little advice
...onal teacher. However,I can give you few advice on how you can be healthier and fit.fir...
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Line 8, column 113, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...as been tutoring for the past 20 years. Im sure youll be offered all the necessary...
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Line 8, column 121, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...tutoring for the past 20 years. Im sure youll be offered all the necessary informatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62130177515 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51117735221 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686390532544 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1146397579 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371525889264 0.216113520407 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123791176549 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766646512142 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170583619929 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718008453026 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.