Some people prefer to help those people who need it in local communities directly, However others prefer to give money to national and international charitable organisations . Do you agree or disagree?
the age-old proverb emphasizes that service to man is service to god some believe that is best to help local populace directly meanwhile others choose to donate it charitable trusts regional and abroad. This essay will agree with the latter view addressing the fact charity is about the belief of donation altruistically without an agenda.
At first, it may seem that visiting orphanages and handicapped societies in one’s locale and directly providing all sorts of necessities is a noble act of humanity. For instance, Mother Theresa cared for the slums of the Kolkata in an erstwhile India is a true testament from which one can draw endless inspiration. It can be said that she revolutionised service sector.
But on a closer look, technology has opened new avenues in our ways of helping the needy. To cite an outstanding example, Ketto a growing online non profitable organization identifies the those unfortunate few across India belonging to age groups battling for their lives in need of dire medical attention. It is realistically more feasible to fund such institutes which has spread even to inaccessible areas of need through e commerce technology.
Ultimately, by funding these well-known committees it is possible to lend a hand to anyone in need be it your neighbourhood slum or a remote part of the nation with an idea of universal kindness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the age-old proverb emphasizes that service...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, so, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12053571429 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97777896597 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705357142857 0.524837075471 134% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 618.680645161 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0816617087 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.444444444 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111072175542 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374075389752 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360985821429 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591121404208 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322310001117 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.01818996416 128% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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