Write about the following topic:
Each year, the crime rate increases.
What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in
criminal activity?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
In modern times, the issue of rise of crime rate has become highly controversial. The reasons of this trend are varied and have led to wide range of effects on society. This essay will outline the reasons why this trend is occuring and offer some measures tackle it.
From an overall perspective, there are two main reasons of rise of crime rate. Perhaps, the primary cause of this phenomenon is lack of education. People who have not gone to school tend to be criminal. In addition, it must be said that social environment has a important role. A good illustration of this is that 70% of criminals have bad social environment, according to a research which was completed by University of Mumbai. Another reason of this trend is poverty. Unlike in the past, more and more people today become desperate about their economic situation. As a result of this, they tend to be a criminal.
Generally speaking, there are a number of solutions which can protect people from being a criminal. Firstly, governments should implement special policies to make the rate of crime fall. A second solution which was recommended by me is to provide financial aid for poor people. This will be worked and people who are desperate about their economic situation will not be criminal. It is clear that we can not expect good behavior from a person who is hungry.
In conclusion, rise of crime rate is a topic which is a fact of life and very relevant to modern society. However, I believe that the best solution is to make financial aid to poor people for making crime rate which is rising fall. If governments and social groups pay attention to this idea, this trend will be ended forever.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ust be said that social environment has a important role. A good illustration of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, so, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71672354949 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58687762386 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518771331058 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9627978047 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.7368421053 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4210526316 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218305941722 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713116960583 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436465629455 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143914831856 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272439332702 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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