You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter
from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be
charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this
information is incorrect.
Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you would
like them to do about it.
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir,
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in response to the letter I received from your bank a few days ago. The letter states that an amount of
$240 is overdrawn for my account and which is why there is an additional penalty of $70 charged. However, I believe that there is
some misunderstanding on your end in this matter.
To elaborate, I have been an account holder of your bank for the last 20 years under the category of classic customers.
If you check my past transactions, there have been transactions consistently of around $200 which is withdrawn on the 25th of every month since January 2020. This is the only transaction from this account and the rest of the transactions are done from my second account. Hence I was surprised when I received a letter from your bank that an amount is overdrawn on the 12th of this month.
There is definitely some mistake in the calculation done by your account head. I request you to kindly look into this matter at the earliest. Hoping for your cooperation as usual and expecting a positive reply.
Yours faithfully,
Dimple Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 269, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ctions are done from my second account. Hence I was surprised when I received a lette...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71204188482 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75237349945 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565445026178 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3528592948 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8181818182 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401812047788 0.216113520407 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136282834884 0.0766984524023 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537577069075 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183173000261 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659010167801 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.