Some universities now offer their course on the internet so that people can study online. Is this positive or negative development?
It is true that there is a increasing tendency for a large number of educational institutions to introduce the Internet-based learning. Although there are several drawbacks of online education, i would argue that there are far more benefits.
The main weakness of the train is that there is less direct interaction. Students could not have experiences to exchange knowledge face to face with their lecturers instead of relying on the documentation or resources collecting from the Internet. Similarity, Students studying online could struggle to do difficult homeworks without any the support of peers and teachers, which makes lost the ability to work together as a team. It is even more easier to search for information on website than in a library, but many find it difficult to form their opinions. This makes many students feel a sense of confusion in learning. Secondly, the learners may also lack the motivation and element of competition. From a practical point of view, with the Internet becoming popular than ever, students could depend on the huge available resources on the website. A typical example of this is that the deadline is near and they do not have a good part of their time to complete. Finally, they choose the way to copy the available reference from the Internet. As result, online learning could not access the academic performance.
Despite the negative mentioned above,i believe that online universities cources are a positive development for various reasons. Firstly, they allow learner to study in the most flexible way, meaning that they might arrange the schedule fitting between learning and housework. Simultaneously, students are more likely to study whenever and wherever. It contributes to create the comfortable learning environment.To illustrate, many parts of the world as USA, where some universities apply the online course to curriculum, top international educational legue tables. Addition to the convenience of online training, tuition fee may be greatly reduced. There is some evidences to support this idea is that the educational institution do not need to put more resources into infrastructure repairment, electricity consumption and upgrading the essential equipments.
In conclusion, while i recognise the possible disadvantages of online learning, i consider it to be a positive development overall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42234332425 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11474773275 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564032697548 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.523636503 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.736842105 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232513607419 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586795840882 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470169074179 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126326751218 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552897988409 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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