Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates.
What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.
Nowadays, there is a growing concern about the destructive effects of Global warming and also ongoing rise in level of the ocean which are consider the major threats for human life in 21st century. While there are problems to global warming, some measures can also solve it.
Indeed, global heating is triggered flood and tsunami. As the earth’s temperature increase, not only the existence ice around the world melts in a rapid pace but also the amount of precipitation changes. Therefore, hefty deluge of ice water and rain flows in diverse areas. As a result, sea and ocean levels rise. This serious phenomenon leads to the destruction of residential and coastal areas, human life and several marine and terrestrial creatures. Japan’s tsunami in 2011 is an example of global warming threats.
Despite, the existence of such problems, one of the ways that can reduce world’s temperature is replace fossil fuels with renewable energies such as sun. Car manufacturers can be forced by governments to produce hybrid and solar cars as a cure-all for car emission problems. For instance, Japan is known as a country with a myriad number of hybrid cars. Furthermore, to deal with the flood, the states can build dams at the mouth of rivers and near coastal areas, and it should not allow construction to take place in the vicinity of shores. If buildings built farther from the shore, deaths and threats would be less.
In conclusion, several catastrophic challenges are existing due to global warming such as flood and tsunami. However, states can push car plant to manufacture solar cars also the construction of barriers, in turn, can prevent the possible hazards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11231884058 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69766511644 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605072463768 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7188991211 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169748297091 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561946310277 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507160678814 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104372438393 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055871268666 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.