Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Hasan, I am a student attending your evening class for economics. I am sorry to say that I will not be able to attend your class anymore due to increased responsibilities at work.
You'll find in my application form that I have a day job at KPMG, an accountancy firm. I've recently been promoted and have been asked to relocate to Sydney. Unfortunately, this means I won't be able to attend your classes anymore to complete the full course and attain the certification.
You will also find that I've had active attendance throughout the whole term and have scored exceptionally well in all the tests taken so far. There is only the final term that is left and if I have your permission, I'd like to study from home with the help of my classmates and appear for the final test. This will help me advance my career while also attain a degree simultaneously.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Regards,
Hasan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You'll
... increased responsibilities at work. Youll find in my application form that I have...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...a day job at KPMG, an accountancy firm. Ive recently been promoted and have been as...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...rtification. You will also find that Ive had active attendance throughout the wh...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... is left and if I have your permission, Id like to study from home with the help o...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...gree simultaneously. Looking forward to hear from you. Regards, Hasan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68263473054 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81516105621 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640718562874 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4291376843 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8888888889 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184377119245 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649647431523 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448300755804 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109592699334 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293118496498 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.