Nowadays people live in a society where consumer goods are relatively cheaper to buy. Do you think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
It is undeniable that in this present instance, products are becoming affordable to purchase in the community. To rationalize, I tend to believe that it has more fruitful outcomes than being disadvantageous and the reasons for my stance will be analyzed further.
Discussing the benefits, the foremost one is that cheaper cost will help the middle class and poor family as it is easy to afford for them. To elaborate, in India D-mart as well as national handloom malls are not only providing discounts but also sell several commodities as the lowest cost than stores. In addition to this, the producer gains profit on that product which he sells at the lowest cost. to justify, consumers will purchase more commodities even if it is not necessary to buy as they perceive it can be beneficial for them to purchase.
Furthermore, the economy of the rate is increasing as more affordable products are being sold in supermarkets and shops. To justify, as supermarkets and shops need more employees so the employee rank will dramatically increase and this is the opportunity for jobless people.
However, I would not overlook the dark side too. To begin with, cheaper consumer foods, as well as medicines, are not beneficial for health this is because the ingredients and parts also not appropriate for health as it is the lowest priced thing. To add to this, the cheapest products are increasingly eminent that buyers even forget to look up to the environment. For instance, buyers buy more products and sometimes they throw out some usable products. Some buyers are addicted to shopping that they even purchase mobile every third month.
To conclude, it can be finally analyzed from my discussions that the merits of buying the cheapest products outweigh the demerits. I believe it will more beneficial if they understand individually.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, look, so, third, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09731543624 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85507962465 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543624161074 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8869663898 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.266666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0629225422478 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0211183434916 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248769564707 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0375036209893 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137052442332 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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