Crime is a problem all over the world and there is nothing that can be done to prevent it. Do agree or disagree with the statement.
It is undeniable that the whole of the world is suffering from the crime and there are no other ways to curb it. To rationalize, I tend to disagree with this view and the reasons for my stance will be analyzed further.
Out of all the reasons, the foremost one is that patrolling more police in every center will decrease crime dramatically. To justify, most of the crime has been done because of less availability of cops. Before the thought of the crime, criminal would think several times if he will do something wrong, he might catch by the police officers. Furthermore, the Government need to enforce certain rules and regulations on the usage of network sites. To explain, In this present instance plethora of information related privacy are available in social media and abduction becoming is by these social applications.
Additionally, another compelling reason is that crime can be tackled by hiring more security technology such as CCTV and cameras. To elaborate, Cctv footage aids to policemen for finding out the culprit. To add this, almost every single information is captured in this technology.
On the contrary, a certain group of individuals believes that crime cannot be prevented. First of all, there is numerous way to hide identity of criminal. By explaining it, Plastic surgery helps to hide the natural appearance of the culprit as well as documentation are easily changed by computers and fraud companies and because of it, criminals can leave the country where he had done the crime. Moreover, the system of the jury in India is too slow that it takes 5-10 years to declare the real criminal.
To conclude, despite the fact that crime is increased globally, there are certain ways to obstruct it. I personally believe, patrolling more police, hiring CCTV technology, and enforcing valid rules can curb this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, such as, as well as, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03583061889 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76961089635 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596091205212 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1934745287 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186291796219 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532215486848 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041802511883 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965346515937 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334866790462 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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