In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
We currently live in an era in which technology has become an essential part of our lives. These days, some people strongly agree that in the next coming years people will change over to reading and buying books and newspapers online instead of choosing to buy a physical book or newspaper. In my opinion, it would be preferable to choose both ways, while there are many reasons to be grateful for the results of this practice.
To begin with, reading electronic books and e-newspapers offers various merits for users. The fact that online materials are inexpensive than physical counterparts, and most of them are free of charge. In addition to that, e-books are very lightweight and accessible. So, no matter where the users were located, it can be read at any time, it is like carrying a library. Furthermore, online resources are more environmentally friendly, than using physical books in the form of paper where these natural resources come from trees.
However, it cannot be denied that there are also some certain people who think that actual books are more comfortable to read. To illustrate with, elderly people will find obstacles to adjust to the way modern society uses books non-physically, older people relish the texture and character of the books, additionally, they are lack of the technological know - how download E-books, thus they prefer to read through the real shape of books which is much easier and simple for them. Moreover, books digitized will be damaged for readers in the long - term. For example, if people are already overly exposed to screens, that can have a very detrimental effect on their development and can cause some health issues such as eye-sight problems, and lack of sleep.
In my opinion, it is clear to see that considering the value as well as the weakness they create, these materials should both be used rather than replaced.
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- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy a thing Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention 61
- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people why might this be the case Do you think it is a positive or negative situation 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 508, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mple for them. Moreover, books digitized will be damaged for readers in the long ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99047619048 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66910528798 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615873015873 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9644885207 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.923076923 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243219621521 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797467222552 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061675336516 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13594882891 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396476964007 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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