In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough.
What are the advantages and disadvantages?
In certain cultures, the way of parenting has emerged different styles in terms of teaching children and convincing their offspring to strive harder in order to acquire whatever they want. Even though this trend offers us positive practice, negative aspects should be pondered as well.
Firstly, some rather obvious advantages to trying hard can be found. One of them is the fact that endeavour to obtain specific goals can lead to self - improvement this means that children would be able to develop new skills periodically as well as focus on their purpose of learning. To illustrate, when a young child encounters obstacles in a particular subject in the class they will find a way to study hard to get remarkable outcomes which requires hard work to succeed such as taking long hours to read a subject and practicing as much as they can. Additionally, young people who always put efforts during their study possibility would gain motivation where the feeling of accomplishment will leave a new sense of energy as haste for the next project.
Contrarily, there are also negative aspects to this issue. To start with, by telling the child that trying something in the hard way to get an infinitive whim can cause feelings of stress and the child will immediately feel bored and monotonous. A good illustration of this is in early childhood children currently experiencing mental disorders include emotionally unstable in their teens due to the large amount of pressure from parents and the environment. This would clearly have an impact of their personality such as involvement in crime and drugs.
To conclude, I do believe both trying to put effort to get everything is good in sort of term. But I also believe that regardless of how hard parents try to persuade their children, it can have a bad impact.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, sort of, such as, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96393442623 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76241039457 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613114754098 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7109748592 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.166666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18854702175 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675050777492 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726904112382 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10843939994 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506620310493 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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