The chat shows the result of a survey of people coffee and tea buying and drinking habit. Summarize the information below by making comparison where necessary.
The bar chat compares the findings of a survey about people's habit of buying and drinking tea and coffee (in percentage), in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.
Overall, the proportion of people that went to a cafe for coffee or tea in the last four weeks remained popular in all the cities except in Adelaide. While, people who bought fresh coffee remained the least Popular.
From the graph, the number of people who drank coffee and tea directly from the cafe in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart was slightly above 60 per cent. These were the highest figures overall. However, in Adelaide, the percentage of instant coffee buyers, and cafe coffee and tea drinkers almost plateaud at 50 percent with the later being a slightly lower than the first.
Furthermore, the proportion of instant coffee buyers in the last four weeks stood at about 45% in Sydney. Similarly, fresh coffe buyers stood just under this figure. Then, the first increased gradually to approximately 53% and 54 per cent in Brisbane and Hobart respectively. While, the later stabled at Brisbane and Adelaide at about 35 per cent which was the lowest percentage in all the five Australian cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. Overall, the proportion ...
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...r in all the cities except in Adelaide. While, people who bought fresh coffee remaine...
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...ly lower than the first. Furthermore, the proportion of instant coffee buyers ...
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...ant coffee buyers in the last four weeks stood at about 45% in Sydney. Similarly,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, similarly, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01015228426 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50430328699 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558375634518 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5601761165 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17330809653 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688483636281 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864865192364 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134241200099 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103144609084 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.