Governments should spend more money on medical research and less on researching the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are debates on where should governments invest concerning research studies. While some people believe funding medical research is more important than environmental research. I think that both are essential to human progress, thus governments should compromise to spend money on both aspects.
Undoubtedly, medical research offers many possibilities in advancing human health. This is for the reason that the treatment of diseases can be discovered and human life-span can be increased. Cancer, for example, is one of the highest causes of mortality among many populations. Cancer treatment requires a lot of hospital resources and is expensive. Moreover, the emotional burden of the diagnosis to families affects their daily lives. Thus, if scientists and physicians’ cancer research would be well-funded by authorities, an increase in positive research pitches can be expected.
However, not only medical research is essential to human life. Environmental research is equally important and should be funded just as much as medical studies. This is because climate change is creating havoc to the planet that puts all terrestrial life at risk. Currently, there have been reports that glaciers in the Antarctic are melting at an unprecedented rate. This is caused by heatwave which leads to the loss of animal life in the region. Most importantly, this melting of glaciers is causing the water levels to rise which might wipe out low lands where people live. Thus, there should be also extensive finding of solutions to these environmental problems.
In conclusion, both medical and environmental research are necessary to create a better world. If governments only focus on medical research, other problems on the planet would not be remedied, especially the environmental aspect. Authorities need to give equal attention and reconsider the importance of both fields to preserve quality life for the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52542372881 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97656459694 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1075186819 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.7894736842 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5263157895 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233836620516 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778440376856 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822219309249 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16712570442 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979411895672 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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