Some animal species such as dinosaurs and dodos become extinct because of natural processes. Therefore, some people think that it is unnecessary to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the bygone years, the extinction of some animal species such as dinosaurs and dodos have taken place due to natural disasters. Therefore, many individuals assert that it is not required to save the animals from getting extinct in the future. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the notion as animals are vital for the environment as well as humans, so they should be prevented from vulnerability.
Animals shares an integral part of the food chain. If they have been becoming extinct by natural processes, the whole food web is impacted. With the destruction of one species from a particular area, the rate of its prey species will increase deliberately. Therefore a natural predator is required to make a balance on the biosphere. Take the White Tigers of Asia, for instance, their sudden deaths due to habitat loss has increased the numbers of deer in the Thar deserts, which, however, impact on the grasslands of the place. Hence, the importance of one animal specie for the environment cannot be overlooked.
Furthermore, the acknowledgment of vulnerable animal species is vital as it prevents the loss of fauna. Most animal species are extinct because of natural phenomena and deforestation. Complete research on the cause of their destruction helps scientists to find ways to preserve them. According to the Red Data Book of 2019, a total of fifty animal species are listed endangered owing to Australian forest fires, from which, Coalas underscored top on the list. Nonetheless, scientists are finding measures to save the species from further extinction.
In conclusion, I believe that the prevention of animal species is necessary, which are on the verge of extinction as they are not only important for our environment but for human beings too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...rey species will increase deliberately. Therefore a natural predator is required to make ...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'complete research'.
Suggestion: Complete research
...of natural phenomena and deforestation. A complete research on the cause for their destruction help...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01547987616 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85375033251 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575851393189 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4437153267 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2941176471 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295089333231 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916268916299 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683690439717 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155871475218 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611911515895 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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