Artists play vital role in society who need definite freedom to advance their innovation ideas and creativity. There is discussion that some people believe total freedom is artist's right; however, I think there should be some restrictions and complete freedom is not required.
Artists, in various types of branches, should have enough liberty to express their hypothesis and skills. Because art is a significant method to preserve cultures and beliefs. In addition, it appears that majority of people follow arts and trying to perform them as an approach to demonstrate complains and criticisms against some negative incidents. For instance, recently several singers and local people exhibit their protestations by songs and painting on street's walls due to murder of insane man. Obviously, this can be helpful for people to show their emotions and angers in society.
Although, some people have optimistic view about total freedom for artists, it can have some destructive effects on community. Initially, it is better to mention to some songs with inappropriate sentences that have affected on children's behavior and numerous music like this are viral in social media. Hence, this event sparks parent's wrath and they declare that this is a method to increase the crimes among teenagers. Secondly, there are diversity of paintings with violent features opposed to women's right that shows male and female are not equal. In fact, these are apparent devastated samples of arts in countries that should be controlled to hinder the next consequences.
In conclusion, artists as important group of community that are valuable require to be supported to thrive their talents, but not completely. There should be some limitations to manage their activities to prevent harmful occurrences.
- Some believe it is the responsibility of government to take care of the environment others think people are responsible for it Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Demand for food is increasing worldwide What is the cause of this What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough 67
- More and more companies are allowing employees to work from home Do you think this is a positive or negative development 78
- Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead Discuss both views and give your opinion 66
- These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events Do you think this is a positive or negative development 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41577060932 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74595016138 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616487455197 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3593393308 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289446350924 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899608486491 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925359442755 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18362089885 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112809929548 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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