Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
On a daily basis, humans can be incapable of getting rid of frustrating circumstances which they had better accept the fact or may have a chance to cope with. It is argued by some that accepting some state of bad circumstances is the most feasible way, while many think that it is worth dealing with those problems or even make it better. From my perspective, I concur with the latter point; however, I also believe in the former one in some cases.
On the one hand, there are some of those who claim that people need to face with their bad facts because it is no use addressing them. First of all, with regards to the natural phenomena like the weather, the human race will certainly have no opportunity to change the situations and hence accepting them obviously. For instance, people sometimes get hot under the collar because their schedules, plans or even flights need to be cancelled or delayed due to bad weather. Additionally, in terms of the handicapped, they cannot change their entire life or the fact that they are disabled. Thus, what they have to do is to accept them and continue to live well. In short, these are several cases that people have no ability to tackle or improve.
Nevertheless, improving and changing conditions, destiny, our facts is more favorable, according to some. To elaborate, in studying for example, students ought to be industrious and pay more attention to their studies in order to improve higher grades instead of turning their blind eyes on low marks. Besides, other than being unemployed, the graduates should try their best until they are recruited successfully. To summarize, these are some practical issues which enable people to find remedies for them.
In conclusion, not only do I believe in the former view, but I also think that it is vital to confront unpleasant situations as the bold.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84227129338 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66006739814 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593059936909 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1280190142 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.642857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175035723797 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591083661334 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331784071302 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10493512941 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00985007081545 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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