Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we are no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
We cannot deny that advertising industry has grown drastically and has influence on many purchasing perception. While, other argues that advertising is becoming so common, people are rarely paying attention on it. In this essay, I will discuss on both view, however, in my opinion, advertisement have positive influence on people’s buying.
Advertising helps the people to provide information about different product and services. When the new produced is launched in the market, we can know about it through advertisement. It helps to know about product’s price, brand, manufacturing process etc, by sitting in one place and help us to compare between the products too. It gives all information in one place that consumers no need to visit store to store, which is also less time consuming. For example, by seeing TV at home, you can know about the new product launched in the market and also can make comparison on others to buy.
On other hand, advertising has becoming common platform for all type of industry. You can see same advertisement everywhere from TV, online or road, due to the hectic life people is ignoring it due to lack of creativity. Moreover, advertising exaggerate the product features and only use the famous character to influence the people. It only show the positive features of the people and also use word like cool, sexy & handsome, which make the people stereotype to buy the product to look alike. Now the people are also becoming rational that they are avoiding such type of advertising. For intense, for fair & handsome product, they have used famous handsome character, but in actual it does not work as shown in advertise.
To conclusion, even the some people are giving rare attention to the advertising, but it is always successful at persuading people in purchasing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08724832215 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85533418943 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.1931119674 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.066666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309212554003 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105817403573 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889151813093 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213765560666 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974969143676 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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