Many people nowadays do not feel safe either when they are at home or go out. What are the reasons and what to do to solve the problem.
In the modern world, majority of people feel insecure at both home and outside as crime rate has been increasing by Leaps and bounds. This essay shall shed light on the reasons of this problem along with some ways to address the issue.
To begin with, there are various causes of feeling unsafe. First of all, nowadays offence is common in every street corner or home. This is happen because of watching violence television shows and movies. To increase the television rating point producer telecast those shows which are jeopardize for younger children. As, they are not mature enough to decide what is inferior or superior for time then they try those activities at home or in society. For instance, world crime report published their finding in newspaper and included that 90 percent crime was committed by youngester after watching crime serial or news. Secondly, people afraid of stay at home or going outside because of natural calamities or accidents. In the materialistic era, every person have their own cars. Instead of car pooling they use their own vehicle to travel short and long distances. As a result, they invite the pollution and weather changes that lead them to life threating illnesses.
On the other hand, there are umpteen solution to overcome this problem. The primary consequence is that it should be the duty of government to prohibit that channels which are not fruitful for whole Society and also parents have to keep an eagle eye on their children so that they are not view evil things. Apart from this, more security cameras should be installed in every street of the house or in commercial area as this will help to reduce the crime and to check the activity of the criminal.
In gist, I would like to assert that every problem has measure to deal with. Although, it is the duty of the bureaucrats but as a good citizen of society people also have to join hand with police to reduce the crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...in every street corner or home. This is happen because of watching violence television...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'jeopardized'.
Suggestion: jeopardized
...producer telecast those shows which are jeopardize for younger children. As, they are not ...
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Line 3, column 649, Rule ID: AFRAID_OF_HEIGHT[1]
Message: The noun should be probably in the plural form: 'stays'.
Suggestion: stays
...ial or news. Secondly, people afraid of stay at home or going outside because of nat...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e their own cars. Instead of car pooling they use their own vehicle to travel sho...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of government to prohibit that channels which are not fruitful for whole Society...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the house or in commercial area as this will help to reduce the crime and to che...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, for instance, as a result, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79041916168 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35467954484 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601796407186 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9773591355 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1176470588 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155701205477 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467815379735 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497348831738 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855506655377 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514344457666 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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