Some people say Supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging for products they sell. Others believe that it is the consumer's responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Packaging is one of the biggest menace which is a by-product of civilization in this modern world. People, unknowingly are consuming heavy packaged products which increase the disposable waste and hence adversely affect the environment.
Supermarkets, I believe, is a major point of sale. The part they play to influence the consumer cannot be undermined. It is of paramount importance to understand that the packaging is required to give that extra degree of safety to the product which sometimes is a demand of the customer.
Contrary to the thought in the above paragraph, there is also a section of people who base their thoughts on the prominent point, demand generates supply. This goes without saying, if the section of the consumer would neglect a certain product because of the excess packaging, then of course, this would become a vicious circle which would eventually result in the end of product life cycle.
Finally, I believe that we should focus on the fact that if the demand of a certain product goes down then you would automatically see it vanishing from the sales stands. Hereby playing your part to support the already disturbed ecological imbalance. Nonetheless, I also firmly believe and stand by the statement "Be the change you want to see in the world". In this scenario, the onus definitely would lay on us to safeguard our environment and I am sure once the wheel starts rotating, it would gain traction and the Supermarkets would play their due role to perfection.
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- Some people say Supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging for products they sell Others believe that it is the consumer s responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging Discuss both views and give your o 78
- Some people say Supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging for products they sell Others believe that it is the consumer s responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging Discuss both views and give your o 73
- Some people say Supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging for products they sell Others believe that it is the consumer s responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging Discuss both views and give your o 73
- Some people say Supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging for products they sell Others believe that it is the consumer s responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging Discuss both views and give your o 56
- Some people say Supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging for products they sell Others believe that it is the consumer s responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging Discuss both views and give your o 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, if, nonetheless, so, then, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85026033899 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1383705441 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181423740367 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689091852047 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571844553783 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122482050709 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570261561324 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.