More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In the materialistic era, people demands are increasing day by day so they prefer well known brands cloth, cars and other expensive things. This issue is causes by various factors. To my mind it is an unwelcomed development.
To begin with, there are umpteen reasons for buying expensive and brand products. Firstly, majority of people love to show status in society they also think that they shall not be treated well in a society if they do not follow fashion and reveals their wealth. For instance, Mukesh ambani who is businessman is popular in all over the world as he have money. So, that is the primary reason to show off the luxurious collection. Secondly, masses like to change themselves within passage of time because they opine change is law of the nature and they attracted towards latest fashion and technology by follow their favourite model, actress in social sites such as Instagram, Facebook and Twitter.
In my perspective, it is a negative development. Because of this, the gap between richer and poor increases and it affect the poverty stricken people. For example, rich people purchase costly items as they have and money. By watching this, poor children often pressurise their parents to buy high priced clothes and gadgets. They create burden on them as they have to take loan to fulfill their children needs. Furthermore, spending huge amount on expensive items is a wastage of money and this money could be spend better on serving the society because economic development is necessary rather than self fulfilment.
In gist, I would like to assert that tendency of purchasing goods from well- known brand has negative impacts on society. The better standard of living is the major cause of this trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
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Message: “So , that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...in all over the world as he have money. So, that is the primary reason to show off the l...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'towards the latest'.
Suggestion: towards the latest
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Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...etween richer and poor increases and it affect the poverty stricken people. For exampl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98965517241 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53542089135 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61724137931 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1455423048 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141737346103 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444599993441 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050188468324 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817963284844 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214504847518 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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