In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate online without any face-to-face contact with other people. Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, the tendency to manage with any business distantly becomes more and more popular. People order things from online shops, work at home and communicate with other people on social media. To my mind, this is a positive trend, because people can not waste their time for a long distance.
When a person uses online abilities, he saves his time and can be free from being in one place. They can move to other cities, countries and it does not influence people's life, because they are able to manage their businesses distantly. Moreover, online shopping is more comfortable, because people have not to go to the shopping center and search for necessary things, they just order it on the Internet from home or other convenient place and the delivery man brings it. For example, according to the statistics information during quarantine time, more than 65 percent of people started to use online services.
On the other hand, people have to communicate offline to be a normal person without social problems. It becomes a problem when people have not had conversation in real life for a long time. They can lose the ability to speak correctly, some people start to be afraid of unknown people, others stop communicating with friends and do not leave their house. Hence, it can lead to physical and mental health problems. For instance, the survey of Italian psychologists has shown that people who work distantly are most susceptible to depression in contrast to people with an offline job.
In conclusion, I can say that online shopping, studying and other activities are convenient things in the modern world. To my mind, people should use this opportunity correctly without spending a lot of time and harming themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99307958478 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63165566191 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560553633218 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9941263193 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.071428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255603575251 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091586717014 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058000678367 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172434250687 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437086115357 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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