Task 2: Nowadays it is not only large companies that can make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is a common thing that making films is now no longer exclusive to large production houses thanks to the advancement of digital technology. While there is the main disadvantage of content control deriving from this, I believe that the trend is more advantageous as it promotes the diversity of the film industry.
Perhaps the key drawbacks of this development is that it is nearly impossible to control the content of all films currently made. While in the past a movie had to pass through a scrutinized assessment from a high-expertise council before getting the approval for releasing, modern filmmakers now just need to fulfill some general terms and requirements from video-sharing platforms, such as Youtube, to upload their work. As a result, thousands of films, sometimes regarding sensitive topics such as discrimination or racism, are published to worldwide viewers everyday. In the best scenario in which these harmful videos are removed from the platforms, they are already viewed by several people.
The main benefits stemming from this development is that it helps to diversify the film industry. With many large companies trying to guarantee their profit in producing movies, most of their products follow the safe and perhaps monotonous patterns. Individuals, on the other hand, can freely choose whatever approach to make a film as, in their perspective, they may just simply follow their passion and do not concern themselves with the financial aspect. This encourages people to focus on various topics of their own interests, which sometimes leads to a huge success. We can see this in many Youtube million-view short films made with only a smart phone about daily activities or cute moments of a cat in a normal house.
In conclusion, I feel that the benefit of creating diversity in the film industry overshadows the disadvantage of difficulty in quality control. This is to note that sharing platforms should pay more attention on and impose stricter regulations about the content of the uploaded videos.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, regarding, so, while, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21646341463 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91918303817 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9830637999 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.615384615 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17547082706 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610641515281 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054131659695 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10032418702 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604240618277 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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