Many people today are worried about young children playing video games. What problems may these games cause, children and society as a whole? How could these problems be reduced?
The universality of video games has presented the modern world with several discussions and issues, none of which is straight forward. I believe there are three problems related to this and three remedies could be taken to tackle the issues.
Perhaps the biggest problem stemming from video games is violence. Many games involve aggressive characters, criminals, war soldiers and even killers, which leads children to believe that such behaviors are normal and in the worst case desirable. Another issue would be the obsessive use. Children who often fall into obsession with these games due to their appealing content prefer the virtual world to their friends and families, resulting in isolation and being socially naive. The issue of physical harms should also be concerned. With children staying in front of the screen for an excessive amount of time, potential health problems could arise, ranging from eye strain to bad postures, which are often difficult to recover from.
Turning to possible solutions, the key step should be to improve the level of education regarding health problems of these games via school and public education. To tackle the obsessive use, warnings and guides about false postures should be included as a part of packaging or even the game so that children will be constantly aware. Furthermore, governments should impose strict legislation to censor violent content of the games such as in movies.
In conclusion, there are the issues of violence and health problems involved in video games which can be addressed with the combination of actions from the government, schools and game companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, regarding, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58861869451 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0958760304 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312947871039 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110841905685 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513325363029 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189926290703 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416139224226 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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