Task 2: Some people think spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The debate on which method of communication is the most effective has never been settled for decades. While some people suggest that it is better to communicate by speaking, I believe that written method is also equally significant.
Regarding spoken form, perhaps the main reason for many to use it is that it is an easy and effective way to quickly convey the ideas as the receivers can depend on the non-verbal language while listening as well. This means that through interpreting eye contact and body language the listeners can easily understand the meaning of the sent message. We can see this in presentations in which the presenters usually put just some words on the screen and most of the content is elaborated through speaking and the accompanied visual inputs.
On the other hand, written text also plays an essential part in conveying information. It is often used when one wants to go into details and meticulously describe a subject. For instance, contracts in the business field are always made in a formal written form because the involved parties want to list carefully all of the demanded aspects, which also acts as the fixed evidence of what has been communicated. Furthermore, it is convenient to spread the written text. Books, for instance, are printed and made millions of copies to spread all over the world and the viewers no matter where they live can get the same messages from the authors.
In conclusion, my firm conviction is that both types of communications are equally important and the users of these two methods should consider the most appropriate way based on their own circumstances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'scent'?
Suggestion: scent
...an easily understand the meaning of the sent message. We can see this in presentatio...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...involved parties want to list carefully all of the demanded aspects, which also acts as th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98901098901 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80498078186 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9948526021 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.818181818 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119329759903 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462791741277 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052326603115 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776372601273 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607379852154 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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