A 4-week holiday can make employees do better at job. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Since work environment nowadays is tremendously full of heavy workloads, employees can experience tension. In addition, it is one measurement that workers should be provided a 4-week holiday annually in order to encourage better performances at work.Personally, I strongly incline to this point of view.
Many advantageous aspects related to leisure occasions help employees to increase their efficiency on a great scale. In addition, there are still many workers who are compelled to work for a long duration and take less day off. Hence, it is widely believed that a short period of vacation can reset their mind and enhance not only consciousness but also productivity in later performances. For instance, believing in the benefit of holidays, many local companies in HCM city have presented their employees a 4-week holiday as an encouragement to work harder in the future.
Moreover, longer holidays can spark creativity. Bringing up many out-standing strategies is usually not the person who commits to work a whole day, but someone who can get outside and enjoy their day-off. The more leisure time an employee has, the more inspired he or she can become. As a result, it would not only benefit personal performances, but it also positively affects the development of a whole company.
Taking everything into consideration, a 4-week holiday is what productivity and creativity are all about.In my viewpoint, I believe that this strategy is an impressive contributor to a business success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, moreover, so, still, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30672268908 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1670890985 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638655462185 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.101613385 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.818181818 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153232116679 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580994376794 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400596999244 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949256176287 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270291823979 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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