As countries develop, people tend to buy more and more cars. Do you think the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?
Undeniably, in this technologically advanced and competitive era, people's tendency to buying commodities is increased due to the development and growth of nationalities. One such trend seen is a spike in the sale of cars, as a result of the luxurious needs of the masses. However, I completely disagree with this notion as it brings more problems to the environment as opposed to certain benefits to individuals.
To embark on, automobiles have brought relief in the hectic commute life of a resider of a metropolitan city. Firstly, it becomes convenient for people to travel long distances, by sitting in an air-conditioned car, without getting fried in the scorching heat of sun. Moreover, the flexibility of leaving for the workplace at your own time without scheduling your day as per the time table of public transport leaves ample amount of time for other activities on the way such as dropping children to school, buying groceries or even taking any calls on the way is accompanied by a driver. Secondly, motor cars are extremely helpful during emergencies where we have to reach the hospital within a stipulated time period.
Despite these advantages, I personally believe that there are copious hazards caused by these motor vehicles to our Mother Earth. First of all, exhaust fumes such as greenhouse gases emitted continuously from engines degrade the air quality. Consequently, humans are facing difficulty in breathing, resulting in numerous diseases. A recent survey revealed that 35% of respiratory disease cases among patients were due to damaged lungs caused by exhaust fumes. if such a situation persists, that day is not far when the earth will become an inhabitable place. Furthermore, rapidly increasing fuel consumption and carbon dioxide is one of the contributors of global warming resulting in the melting of ice caps. The adverse effects of this event are increasing in the water levels leading to floods and is a major cause of concern to our environment.
To conclude, despite some pros of making life easier for mankind by providing relief in terms of travel and time, the cons such as climatic changes and an increase in the number of diseases due to excessive usage of cars on our environment greatly outnumber the advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... damaged lungs caused by exhaust fumes. if such a situation persists, that day is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14363143631 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97252296936 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623306233062 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0823825431 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.533333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131453921422 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327367981273 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433339834604 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779863845004 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464389631334 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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