Some people believe that it is best to do the same type of work throughout your life. Others feel that it is beneficial to change jobs often. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Current environment employment is must and people always try to be uplift their own carrier. In this context, some people think, work is same type of work is more beneficial, then changing the work scope one to another time to time. My opinion is, job change is the best way to get the more benefits.
Experience and the subject matter deep knowledge can gained on working in same type works. This will expand the knowhow of limited area and expand the skills on day to day routine. Thus, will creates freedom on the workplace and key role in the department. Further, work with same team will create corporate environment when you doing the work in same place.
On the other hand, changing the job roles or work place will have to meet different kind of people. This will allow engaging with different culture as well as knowledge skill sets, which will give more insights to personal improvement. In addition, with the change, can have more fringe benefits rather working is same place for long time. Further, experience in wide range produces opening for future.
Considering all, there are benefits in having same type work as well as changing the job scope. However, has more befits with the changing job and get more skills and engage in different culture for own development. Therefore, my opinion is work scope change is more beneficial than the continuing same types of work throughout the carrier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...kills on day to day routine. Thus, will creates freedom on the workplace and key role i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, in addition, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85892116183 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42281727744 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53112033195 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6066632763 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.6428571429 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246239724552 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929141914668 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789032466877 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163107695552 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634947967443 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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