It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the world of today, the question governments should provide aid internationally or domestically but it is a fact that the government should not capable to reach every nook and corner so that they help their nation people. I strongly agree with this argument and more discuss this in the following paragraphs.
To embark on, there are several reasons for helping their country people. First and foremost, citizens often pays thair taxes to the government for their benefits as well as for their nation soldiers. Therefore, the government firstly thinks about thair nation along with poverty. To illustrate, some countries face a number of problem because they do not have sufficient government services so it is important to government pay attention and take some beneficial action to solve this issue. If the government should help overseas people than people of their countries will also discuss about political parties and next time the party will not win.
In contrast, it is important for the government to help other countries people in some situations. Firstly, every nation face some natural disasters and other some critical issue. When they have some financial support and aid toward other countries. Consequently, it is our moral duty to support these countries. For a classic example, amazon forest, every nation's government send their support and prevent this situation. why this is necessary because when our own nation face some kind of problem, other nation will also support our countries.
In conclusion, I truly believe that leader of the nation should help overseas people's but firstly focus on their country's people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...a classic example, amazon forest, every nations government send their support and preve...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Why
...eir support and prevent this situation. why this is necessary because when our own ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, as for, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26996197719 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64342520238 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528517110266 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7829951135 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264352009311 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974011271909 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890760207078 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191129351523 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694932700152 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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