You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago
but the camera has still not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company.
In your letter:
Introduce yourself
Explain the situation
Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with regards to the service I received from your showroom. I am Jack,a regular customer of your outlet, always prefer to purchase most of the
electronic products from your shop only. I have been satisfied with the quality of items and service to satisfy your customers since last 5 years; however, this time my experience was too much
terrific.
Let me explain what was happened at length. I have purchased a brand new camera of Canon company to gift my father on his upcoming birthday. Unfortunately, when I came at home and started it, I found that
the flash light of camera was not working properly which reduced the quality of picture. To solve this issue, as it was under warranty period, I returned it with original payment receipt to your technical staff
a week before. Surprisingly, it is already more than one week but still the problem is not resolved. I am exceedingly dissatisfied with the service which certainly affects my trust towards your company.
As a resolution of this issue, I would like you to interfere and any look in to this matter to repair it as earliest. If not possible, please give me full refund so that I can purchase other gift for my father.
Hope you would understand the seriousness of this problem and take appropriate action as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Jack Marshal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...I received from your showroom. I am Jack,a regular customer of your outlet, always...
^^
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t, always prefer to purchase most of the electronic products from your shop only....
^^^
Line 4, column 42, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lectronic products from your shop only. I have been satisfied with the quality of...
^
Line 4, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er, this time my experience was too much terrific. Let me explain what was hap...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89166666667 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75902559289 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6375 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1403861588 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3076923077 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206786151576 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627470782258 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453743511757 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852529404395 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291601117944 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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