Why are young people leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities ?Do the advantages outweight the disadvantage ?
In this contemporary world, there is a massive influx of migrants who flock from countryside to urban cities due to the availability of
educational opportunities and better occupations. Although I cannot deny that migrants moving to sprawling cities can receive several merits , I still believe the setbacks of this issue outweight the advantageous aspects.
To begin with, there are many benefits in modern cities that captivate rural residents . Firstly, it is more straightforward to look for high-quality tertiary schools . In addition, most universities with reputation are located in urban areas. Hence, if ambitious students desire to earn higher degree , they will definitely have to choose well-know colleges which can gratify their high demand. Secondly, the authorities in cities cover suffificient opportunities for workers to enhance their careers . For instance, it is a professional doctor that the countryside provide him or her with neither promotion or facilities , and this case is totally different when a specialist works in urban areas.
However, despite these merits described above, I still believe there is a variety of inevitable drawbacks, negatively affecting citizens’ life. To start with, the higher rate of unemployment may come as an expense. The more the workers look for occupations in sprawling cities, the fewer the jobs’ positions are. Hence, many unemployed people can suffer from a heavy financial burden on daily life, leading to potential criminal activities. Secondly, children participating in dense colleges do not receive enough facilities or devices to serve their study. Instead of focusing on a small number of students like in the past, almost universities nowadays have to provide a massive number of rooms and machines for every student in their school. However, these provisions may not always be sufficient.
Take everything into consideration, although migrants who move to urban areas can gratify not only their dream jobs but also their educational opportunities, many setbacks related to densely populated area may come and weaken the quality of people’s life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, in addition, to begin with, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59133126935 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05736399809 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613003095975 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4641151929 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.875 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156351298733 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423329564672 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405087229214 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849706943834 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181691239752 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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