lost something in the flight

Essay topics:

lost something in the flight

While flying with your airlines last Saturday on flight number 3098B, I kept my watch in the pouch below the tray table. I was seated in 27A and I might have forgotten to pick up the watch. When I reached my house and started unpacking is when I noticed that it was missing.

This watch belonged to my late grandmother and was given to me at my college graduation. I was planning to hand it over to my son, who finishes high school next month. It is, therefore, invaluable to me and would hope to receive it quickly.

I would highly appreciate it if the airline staff can consult with the lost and found department and confirm if they have found my watch. I am attaching a picture of it along with this letter for identification. I would like to request you to please let me know if the item is in your possession

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng with this letter for identification. I would like to request you to please let...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 666.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32467532468 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53872021975 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62987012987 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.1949833059 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.0 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0516407255032 0.216113520407 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0170048004532 0.0766984524023 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318297744984 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0325097170695 0.12726935374 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229890066595 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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