The natural resources such as oil and freshwater are being consumed at alarming rate. What problems it can cause? How can we solve this problem?
In the world of today, it is fact that people depend on natural resources so that, level of this is decline everyday. In this essay I intend to explore the problem of this caused by increased consumption of oil, fresh water and forest, and suggest some solution.
To embark on, there are several tackles to this phenomenon. First and foremost, prices of natural resources are increased therefore, people face numerous problem such as, money problem and transportation problem. For a classic example, middle class and poor families do not have enough money for surviving their life, even they should expense their salary on petrol or diesel. In addition, environment problem clearly something that is often discussed in today’s world. While, it is individual responsibility to preserve forest for fresh air and drifting away from health issues. Moreover, people also aware of recycling garbage because, this is obvious reason for not getting clean water. To illustrate, this day’s whole countries oceans are become more pollute due to people awareness. If people can not understand their moral duty, it will be imposed dangerous impact on globe.
On solution side, there are various suggestion for destroy this causes. To begin with, people should share their vehicle with college or their friend therefore, two vehicle fuel is consume in one bikes. The Government should be introduced new transportation which can readily access by public. Furthermore, the Government preserve some large land in their nation for trees that’s why, control envirment around this area and people can live their life with fullest. What is more, some product which is not recycled should be banned by government such as, plastic, and other product like plastic bottle reuse by public. Individual should utilize recycling way and not throw their garbage in river.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that oil, forest, and fresh water are necessary for our life, so we use them very carefully else our future generation will not take benefit of this resources.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...urces so that, level of this is decline everyday. In this essay I intend to explore the ...
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Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ure generation will not take benefit of this resources.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22121212121 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57693555951 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1129263598 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.352941176 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223765964525 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675243349827 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621763067104 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132776725395 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534662952289 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...urces so that, level of this is decline everyday. In this essay I intend to explore the ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ure generation will not take benefit of this resources.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22121212121 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57693555951 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1129263598 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.352941176 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223765964525 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675243349827 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621763067104 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132776725395 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534662952289 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.