These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out at work. What could be the reason for this? Do you think it is positive or negative development?
It is no secret that there is an increase in the number of men taking on the househusband role while more and more women are becoming the breadwinners of their family. There could be several reasons for it, and I assert that this reversal is a positive trend.
Recent decades have witnessed many modifications with regard to the social position of male and female. Women are no longer totally subordinate to their spouses, instead they tend to step out of home and become career women. It has also been socially acceptable for men to stay at home and do childcare. Compared to the old days when prejudices against women still existed as a matter of specific concern, modern context comes with the fact that marriage partners can equally exchange roles depending on personal preference. More opportunities are open for female to pursue their dreams, meanwhile male spend more time on domestic tasks.
From my own perspective, the change described above should be seen as progress. Equating the responsibilities of both genders is critical not only for attaining the so-called gender parity but also for meeting a wide range of development goals. It undoutedly helps to boost women’s potential in many respect such as politics, military or economy. As a result, the society is filled with joy the weak sex is under no pressure to freely achieve success. At the same time men are in charge of childcare and home affairs as they wish to do. Couples should be left to make their own decisions about which parental roles each partner takes, according to their particular circumstances and needs.
All things considered, the changing role of men and women is likely a breakthrough in terms of gender equality, which is desirable in the contemporary era.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun respect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many respects'.
Suggestion: many respects
...dly helps to boost women’s potential in many respect such as politics, military or economy. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, while, such as, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96598639456 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75835031492 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2499841551 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.285714286 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226703702886 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722162199238 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663532906122 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125603172751 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082194892638 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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