Nowadays education quality is very low. Some people think that we should encourage students to evaluated and criticise their teachers .Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss on both sides.
Education problem is something that is often discuss in today’s world. Some society of people believe that the student should evaluate their teachers after each course. Other argue that it would lead to poor discipline in the classroom. However, both has its own advantages and disadvantages which I shall discuss in following paragraph.
To embark on, there are many drawbacks in student assessments. First and foremost, the students are very young compare to their teachers therefore, they cannot identify the teacher’s performance due to lack of knowledge. For a real-life example, these days tutor is well educated than student even in university as well as the student also not prepare wall in their filed that's why they unable to find right skill in the tutor. In addition to this, student assessment lead poor discipline in the classroom. If each of the student is allow to comment on the teachers performance, then teachers self-respect would be discipline in the school. Thirdly, student focus on the teacher behavior rather than study as a result student not obtain knowledge about their subject and loss their grade in exam.
In stark contrast, student assessment has their own benefits. To begin with, this kind of feedback is used to improve the teachers performance. Teaching method is crucial for student success, so the student suggest some method which is beneficial to receive knowledge speedily. Furthermore, the process of evaluation should be encouraged to learn challenging thing from their teachers evaluation. What is more, it is helpful for administrators because with the student support they can searching teachers mistakes and improve in it and provide best education to their student.
In conclusion, I would say that student evaluation of teachers would be beneficial for both the teachers and students. It is obvious that evaluation must be responsible but set some limit for students therefore they can maintain their study life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'allowed'.
Suggestion: allowed
...he classroom. If each of the student is allow to comment on the teachers performance,...
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Message: Did you mean 'commenting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: commenting
...ssroom. If each of the student is allow to comment on the teachers performance, then teach...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
... the student is allow to comment on the teachers performance, then teachers self-respect...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...kind of feedback is used to improve the teachers performance. Teaching method is crucial...
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to challenge'.
Suggestion: to challenge
...valuation should be encouraged to learn challenging thing from their teachers evaluation. W...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'search'
Suggestion: search
...cause with the student support they can searching teachers mistakes and improve in it and...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
...teachers mistakes and improve in it and provide best education to their student. In concl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30990415335 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8068360941 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552715654952 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7768830632 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7647058824 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3529411765 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34418843599 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114423787273 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597408646061 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221204320632 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559926747796 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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