Some people believe that it is better to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, the scenario in which more and more employees have to suffer from undesirable working conditions are skyrocketing. Some argue that it would be more beneficial for those people to relent, while others believe that workers should try to tackle out the issues. From my point of view, I agree with the latter statement that individuals should take steps in order to mitigate such hardships.
There are several reasons why individuals should act to improve their workplace hardness. One of those incentives would be the long-term advantages of holding a suitable job. That is because as people can strive for occupations they are adept at, their performance thus could enhance considerably, which would contribute to their experiences at workplaces. Another reason to attempt changing harsh situations is the availability of numerous job and profession opportunities in today's world. It means that workers would no longer need to endure from extreme conditions like they used to be when jobs are scarce. In other words, this phenomenon enables employees to opt for the works fitting to their aptitude and passion.
Apart from the above pros, there are still benefits that ones can obtain from admitting these disadvantages. It is clear that arduous circumstances are the best paths to develop one's experiences. As a result, people who can successfully undergo such dilemmas would eventually become more decisive in their upcoming career. Furthermore, sometimes, underlying those unsatisfactory situations could be vast chances that could not be found elsewhere. For example, individuals who work in an English coffee shop, though not their true interests, could still noticeably profit from learning another new language.
In conclusion, whereas sometimes workers should accept their current jobs in order to take advantages of the respective opportunities, seeking for a proper environment is still a better solution in long terms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, so, still, thus, whereas, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93612556498 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3266659999 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.8 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146409257503 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438974162816 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362357110281 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856113950586 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179188473442 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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