In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
We live in an era where almost everything around us is computerized. You can now do anything from the comfort of your home, thanks to the internet and the online world. This gives us the opportunity to do a lot of things, ranging from online shopping to even reading newspapers and magazines. Buying books and newspapers will soon be something of the past, and i totally agree with the notion for a myriad of reasons.
To begin with, living in a world where people have a penchant for going green, buying books and newspapers does not seem like the right thing to do, since they are made of paper,and to get paper, trees have to be cut in the process. This might eventually wreck havoc on our environment and the level of oxygen we breathe. While switching to reading online saves us the trouble of polluting Earth.
Furthermore, reading newspapers online could save us space in our homes rather consumed with stacked piles of hard copied newspapers. For instance, my uncle-who had been a persistent newspaper buyer for years-used to keep them everywhere in the house, to a point where they started collecting dust and had to be thrown away. This could have indeed been avoided if he read and saved them online.
Everyone could benefit from having newspapers read online, from the elderly to those with poor eye sight conditions. Online reads could be made easier for them since certain applications could read it out loud for them without having to rely on others for this purpose. In addition,reading newspapers and books online saves the money spent on buying them. Indeed some would argue that the devices used to read these newspapers are much more expensive, however, i believe that their benefits outweighs their expense
All in all, the world is progressing towards making our loves easier, and online reading seems to be doing the task at its best.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...hing to do, since they are made of paper,and to get paper, trees have to be cut in t...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: WRECK_HAVOC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wreak havoc'?
Suggestion: wreak havoc
...t in the process. This might eventually wreck havoc on our environment and the level of oxy...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ent and the level of oxygen we breathe. While switching to reading online saves us th...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...ne, from the elderly to those with poor eye sight conditions. Online reads could be made ...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , reading
... on others for this purpose. In addition,reading newspapers and books online saves the m...
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Line 7, column 357, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...e saves the money spent on buying them. Indeed some would argue that the devices used ...
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Line 7, column 462, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...apers are much more expensive, however, i believe that their benefits outweighs t...
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Line 7, column 515, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t their benefits outweighs their expense All in all, the world is progressing tow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84375 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53869276154 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.306994165 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.714285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271813463788 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959987847721 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531010424241 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151481047782 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051922373755 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.