Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s military force or policy force, while others think women are not suitable to these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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In this contemporary society, it is widely belived that females should be allowed to take part in military and policy issues as they play equal roles as men. However, there are many people against this opinion, stating that women cannot manage these kinds of occupations well. Although I understand why many people advocate the second viewpoint, I’m of the opinion that women should be provided with equal opportunities to enhance their positions in this modern life.
On the other hand, I understand why many people of the fervent conviction argue that becoming politicians or militants is not suitable to females. To begin with, one of the foremost factors is the lack of physical fitness. Compared to men, women find it more difficult to achieve demanding tasks as they have always been the representative for weak side. For instance, in term of arresting criminals, men are more successful because they possess high fitness level. Moreover, the emotional state is also an inevitable problem. For example, if women are sent to batterfields to fight against drug dealers, murderers, they might tolerate difficult situtions such as injured criminals or horrible punishment.In contrast, males have more potential to get used to these types of issues since they know how to control their stability.
Despite the reasons described above, I still believe that both genders should be given equal chances related to the military or policy force. Firstly, although women cannot control their emotion in an effective way, they are better at critical thinking. Taking Europe as an ideal example, if women had not participated in the army plans, the Europe would not have defeated Germany, bringing back peace and unification. Moreover, there are many evidences which prove the issue that women can also do well in national policies . Nowadays , it is really common to see women as politicians, including Hillary Clinton, Gabrielle Giffords . These people effectively approach campaigns that protest femine rights, not only leading to an equal society but also avoiding discrimination.
Taking everything into consideration, although many people approve that women are not suitable for important and physical-demanding jobs including policy or military, I still consider that they have the potential to manage these big stuffs with their actual abilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39673913043 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80640011488 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600543478261 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4832294207 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.125 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272031185727 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842159184674 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484498617104 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167094499518 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595622958936 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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