Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.
Many people have this observation that performers like movie stars, singers or sports player receives a lot of money. In my opinion, a discussion of why this statement is completely true will be presented in this essay and explain why other mainstream jobs should be paid more amount.
Although entertainers are bagging out huge amount of money, it is due to the reason that they tend to have major achievements and huge fan following. For instance, Cristiano Ronaldo has become world's top highest paying footballer because of the ability to score goals in every single match and is the highest most following celebrity on Instagram. Therefore, these reasons play an important part in why they earns so much.
Even though these celebrities are being paid too much, there are other job areas as well that requires the same attention as that of giving to these famous stars. To further elaborate, Doctors who treat cancer illnesses are paid very less amount of money by the hospital because it is not a famous profession. For example, in Spain, doctors went on strike because they were underpaid and asked the government to increase their pay same as the football players. As a result, this field should be rewarded with extensive amount of money.
In conclusion, celebrities such as cinema stars, music makers or sports players are being paid huge amount of money. This essay discussed why having such a large fan following and achievements can result in ending up earning too much, and also pointed out why doctors profession should be paid highly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'top the highest'.
Suggestion: top the highest
...ce, Cristiano Ronaldo has become worlds top highest paying footballer because of the abilit...
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Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'earn'
Suggestion: earn
...sons play an important part in why they earns so much. Even though these celebriti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99230769231 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56248538746 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.584885492 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14921915401 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607877712159 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448256075526 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955969737154 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423015976924 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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