More and more people are working at home rather than in the workplaces. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Technology and Internet are increasing rapidly in the modern world and become a
essential part of human life. Growing technological can influence can be even
seen in the working environment. I agree that the increase of homeworking has
been of real benefit to workers. I am persuaded by the two main reasons below.
Firstly, employees working at home do not have to spend a myriad of time and money for transportation to go to work and back home and avoid accidents in the road . Many people take an hour or more to move to the company by public transportation, car or motorbike on a daily basis. Moreover, people need pay for public transportation tickets or fuel each month. For example, traffic jam has been becoming increasingly prevalent in big cities in Vietnam like Ha Noi and Ho Chi Minh city, so Vietnamese people spend many hours to reach the destination in rush hour. Besides, housewife working from home can easily pick up your children from school and have more time to take care of your family. Thus, working from home is more convenient, cost-saving and time-saving than working from the office.
Secondly, people who work at home feel autonomy, comfortable and less stressful than that in the office so they work effectively. Because they do not need face to face with management or superior so employees working from home do not have pressure from them. To add to this, if you work in office, you will be effortlessly distracted by colleagues so it reduces your productivity. Hence, working from home helps workers to rise work effiency.
In summary, homeworking can gain a lot of advantages for employees than working from the office . Employees can have more control over their lives and have more time with your family and they do not work under pressure
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion:
... technological can influence can be even seen in the working environment. I agree...
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...have to spend a myriad of time and money for transportation to go to work and bac...
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...ack home and avoid accidents in the road . Many people take an hour or more to mov...
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...mily and they do not work under pressure
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79039808993 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1504016634 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.625 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24979238745 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823673039034 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593140835117 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857116838045 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084905213961 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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