Health and fitness levels of children and teenagers are declining these days. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is undeniable that trend of reducing health and fitness levels of pupils is one of the most challenging issues in the world nowadays. This essay agrees that all schools should offer a certain number of subjects in sports to their learners and use the example from reality to demonstrate points and support arguments. Firstly, sports brings to enormous benefits for youngsters’ health and secondly, the more exercises students do the more beautiful their body are.
First of all, the fact is that a lot of advantages from physical activities at schools can help the pupils to increase their well-being. That is to say that when the students practice a physical lesson, their blood circulation will run more smoothly and the arteries carry enough blood to nourish their heart and brain. Any kind of sports such as athletics, swimming and high jump has significantly proven to be successful at increasing condition of physical and mental health. A recent research found that whatever type of sports the children learn and practice is conducive to 10% higher performance at school than others who are lack of sports activities.
Another point to consider is that the sports at schools form pupils’ body shape fit. Taking part any kind of sports regularly which is suitable with the age would keep your body slim and strong. If the students don’t join sport activities, they will be likely to become obesity because doing exercise is the best way to work off the fat. Additionally, it should not be forgotten that the students under 18 years old belong to the golden period to establish body shape, specially the height. The schools in Mekong Delta is a prime example, where have large yards for pupils to learn and practice the physical lessons every day, most of their students have burly bodies and even become national athletes.
To sum up, the physical education should be offered to all children in all schools because of better condition in health and fitness and the fact that exercise help students study more efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, kind of, such as, first of all, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00293255132 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55066226742 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563049853372 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.7948912494 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.230769231 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327283514278 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109397420209 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680967107753 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217091592828 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668561234573 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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