Some people say History is one of the most important school subject. Other people think that, in today’s world, subject like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Some people claim that the most significant educational subject is history, but others consider that science and technology carry more weight than history in recent times. If asked to speak my mind on this discussion, I would say I feel science and technology more crucial in the 21 century.
It’s undeniable that people can learn from past experiences and mistakes. Understanding the countries’ background has led us to know the culture and how to make improvements; moreover, before the disasters happening, people have little knowledge of the results from catastrophes and less awareness about preventions For instance, people who construct buildings have a bunch of safety gears, issues and standards because we earned many vita knowledge from the earthquake happened on 21 September 1999.
It’s evident that the 21 century is a science and technology era. Even though historical incidents offer a bunch of useful data to improve, there are little results can be achieved without scientific measurements and advanced equipments. Take a relevant case as an example, by investing building science, more materials such as woods which have better resistances than traditional concrete are used in constructions; furthermore, most modern houses have started installing earthquake detections which warn the residents immediately and convey a relative report to them.
To sum up, according to the above statements, history, technology, and science are both significant to make the developments. Although history provides us valuable advice, it won’t have a huge evolution without assistance from science and technology. It’s obvious that science and technology take more advantages the history.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...ience and technology more crucial in 21 century. It’s undeniable that people can le...
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Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...s undeniable that people can learn from past experience and mistakes. Understanding the countri...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hes and less awareness about preventions For instance, people who construct build...
^^
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'there're little results'?
Suggestion: there're little results
...ffer a bunch of useful data to improve, there’s little results can be achieved without science measure...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, i feel, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7233201581 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03738931999 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660079051383 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.857128643 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.8 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218424989555 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928280981071 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841017201943 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13952114199 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974714063447 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...ience and technology more crucial in 21 century. It’s undeniable that people can le...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...s undeniable that people can learn from past experience and mistakes. Understanding the countri...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hes and less awareness about preventions For instance, people who construct build...
^^
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'there're little results'?
Suggestion: there're little results
...ffer a bunch of useful data to improve, there’s little results can be achieved without science measure...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, i feel, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7233201581 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03738931999 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660079051383 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.857128643 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.8 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218424989555 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928280981071 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841017201943 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13952114199 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974714063447 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.